So Close, But Yet So Far...
A cool summer breeze came across the field during the fourth quarter in the tournament final to decide one of the biggest 7 on 7s of the year. My team and I were locked in, we had prepared for this opportunity all summer. The silence was eerie in the huddle, the play was called, “slot left tumulte H”. I knew I was the first place the quarterback was looking, the ball was definitely headed my way. I tried to remain calm and act normal on the way out to my position, I casually jogged out to the hash to the left of the formation. I anxiously waited for the quarterback to snap the ball, It felt like an eternity. When I finally heard the quarterback give the go ahead. I snapped into action and began my route, duck underneath the first linebacker and streak up and over the second and get up the hash. I was wide open, I knew it, I looked up and the ball was on its way. I adjusted to the short throw and slowed down, when the ball finally came I caught it and felt an excruciating pain throughout my right hand. I knew something was wrong, I looked down and my hand was messed up, my right ring finger was broken in three places, and the tendon was gone, it looked like a bomb went off in my hand.
You did a good job using descriptive words. Also, the analogies help the reader imagine your shock and fear as you realized that you had broken your finger in multiple places.
ReplyDeleteI liked the specific details you used in your story, I can tell this moment stuck with you. I also broke a couple fingers from football, not as bad as you did, but no one ever tells you how much broken fingers hurt.
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